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Snoopy The Dragon
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 04:08:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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There was a baby dragon
Snoopy was his name
He was so vey friendly
And also very tame
He had one little problem
I bet you'd never guess
He had a nose for trouble
Was always in a mess
He stuck his nose in everything
He tried to act so coy
Unfortunate but we all knew
He was a naughty boy
But one day poor old Snoopy
He had to pay the price
For being far too nosy
It wasn't very nice
A bee hive looked inviting
To stick his nose inside
Of course, found out the hard way
He got more than hurt pride
The bee's they were not happy
To see the dragon's tongue
He ran round village crying
Oh, no I have been stung
So Snoopy learnt his lesson
And now knows not to pry
The bee's had better hide away
Or he'll make sure they fry
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Re: Snoopy The Dragon
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 06:57:42 PM AEST
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Re: Snoopy The Dragon
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by wizard on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 10:47:36 PM AEST
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very cute...it brings me back to my boyhood.
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Re: Snoopy The Dragon
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by bgj on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 02:55:01 PM AEST
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I like this. Good job!
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Re: Snoopy The Dragon
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 10:58:59 PM AEST
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Had the great rhyming scheme like all your work..
and the idea was so innocent and precious..
Tad bit more puncuation 'round the last line of 6th would'nt of hurt..
(as if he were speaking?)
and the very last line as well..
(exclamation points are in order!!)
He WILL make sure they'll fry!!..lol
It was cute all the same!
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