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Back-stabbing friend
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 02:10:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Quit stabbing me
Oh how my back bleeds
trusting an untrustable
is the last thing i need
Why cant you give a dam
so evil to me
speaking behind my back
pain not unseen
STOP IT
IT HURTS
like a kid screaming to his nurse
making him bleed
making it worse
So your frustrated
cause im in pain
What is my loss
is your gain
but a friend you are not
i know your lies
you cause it too
my saddened cries
but tears are also rage
DONT HURT ME AGAIN
you vile speck of human waste
you back-stabbing friend
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hardrocker15198916
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2005-07-11 14:10:23]
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Re: Back-stabbing friend
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by Benny14 on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 02:17:21 PM AEST
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| thats very intense, as it should be, i liked it |
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Re: Back-stabbing friend
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by trini on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 04:18:12 PM AEST
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Truthfully i think that you did a good job, you captured this feeling very nicely.
-Trini |
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Re: Back-stabbing friend
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by PuppyChow on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 07:22:46 PM AEST
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i wrote a poem about this too. its a pretty common topic... as sadly theres many out there. this seems to truely be written from the heart and was easy to follow/relate to. keep it up!!! loved it. please check out my poetry and return this favor by commenting...it seems alotta people dont want to comment anymore...
nice job, keep it up. |
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