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Cloud Nine
Contributed by
CarolinaBlue
on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 06:23:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Carry me away...My love
Wrapped in your embrace
Slowly...up the staircase
Desire burning in my eyes
Lay me down...My love
Amidst a bed of roses
Lustful...my heart pulses
Your hand moves up my thigh
Kiss me sweetly...My love
Taste...of cherry fantasies
Slipping off.... my silken panties
I emit a pleasurable sigh
Ravish me completely...My love
Partake of warm pink flesh
Drinking fully of my sweetness
Our bodies now entwine
Fulfill me...endlessly...My love
Penetrating...deep within my soul
Allowing esctacy to take hold
Riding high....atop Cloud Nine
Copyright ©
CarolinaBlue
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2005-07-11 06:23:45]
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Re: Cloud Nine
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 09:57:18 AM AEST
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Lovely poem a poetic nude painting nicely done . . .
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Re: Cloud Nine
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by brew on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 10:13:42 AM AEST
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Well written........mind wondering , yet very subtle. Thanks for sharing.
Brew~ |
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Re: Cloud Nine
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 04:17:40 PM AEST
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Aww this was so beautiful. A pretty tender write. I enjoyed it.
Thanks for posting.
Jane xxx |
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Re: Cloud Nine
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 04:54:02 PM AEST
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Sultry indeed! Sexy stuff!! Another good one Blue...Keep it up.
Scorp. |
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Re: Cloud Nine
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by CarolinaBlue on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 04:57:27 PM AEST
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ok you either like this one or you hate it, I was a little uncomfortable posting it because of it's suggestive nature, but it was meant to be subtle and tender. I guess it all depends on the mind's eye. just had to clear that up, had been feeling uncomfortable with this write since i posted it!
;-) ~Blue~ |
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Re: Cloud Nine
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by wizard on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 10:51:40 PM AEST
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wow...um..well..*blushing*..I ...ah..
steamy stuff...very erotic..i didnt find it very 'subtle', but i can see why some may.
very nice...i enjoy a sexy write like this from a woman!! ;-)
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Re: Cloud Nine
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by ribbons_and_lace09 on
Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 06:28:31 PM AEST
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wow! this is an amazing write! kudos to you! i absolutely love it! make me want to go grab my lover and hug him and never let go. hehe! :) very very beautiful.
always,
megan |
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