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Stubborn
Contributed by
Benny14
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Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 03:40:40 AM in AEST
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I will stare down the sun ‘til I go blind
I will walk this earth, let my feet undo
I will best these mountains at their game of patience
Just to prove my point to you
I will shout ‘til it fills these walls
I will rebuild a spider’s web as good as new
I will bear the boxer’s blows
Just to prove my point to you
I will write ‘til even Shakespeare is weary
I will find twin snowflakes two
I will force statues to cower
Just to prove my point to you
Will you do the same to prove yours too?
Nevertheless, I will wait for you
Copyright ©
Benny14
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2005-07-11 03:40:40]
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Re: Stubborn
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 04:07:37 AM AEST
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Bravo! I like the determination and stubbornness behind this. there is truth, real truth, worth the fight. I couldn't agree more. And it was the author's note that drew me in; "make sure youre wrong before they waver". Precisely! Too many people do waver even without proof against them, but when we find we really are wrong, it is the time to let go, because it's about truth, not our own image or ego.
As you can see, I agree. Also I'm too tired to be making comments, so I'm prone to ramble. Keep up the good work.
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Re: Stubborn
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 05:59:43 AM AEST
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Awesome,
still readin,
huggs,
emy |
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