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It's All Black and White
Contributed by
Tanna
on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Onyx Queen
Ivory Knight
Opposite sides of the board
Playing for keep
The price is steep
Who's heart will be pierced by the sword?
Cunning minds
Ties that bind
It becomes a battleground
For what was once yearned
Was now easily spurned
The effect was quite profound
Pawns were taken
Souls were shaken
The Queen abandoned the rook
For lost love she will now grieve
She wore her heart on her sleeve
To see it, one only had to look
In this game of chess
Her rank and position had become less
She realized this a moment to late
Lost the battle to the Knight
He turns to another tonight
For him, checkmate.
Copyright ©
Tanna
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2003-01-09 20:20:00]
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Re: It's All Black and White
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by spooky on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 08:41:59 PM AEST
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well written,,chess was correcy,,,but the only thing about thatis the king never leaves the board,,,you can continue,,as long as you have someone even if he is just a pawn,,
your friend in words,,,spooky |
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Re: It's All Black and White
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by Fwog on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 11:09:38 PM AEST
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Hi Tanna,
This is an excellent write, and what a novel approach. I really enjoyed,
Keep up the great work. |
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Re: It's All Black and White
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by venkat on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 06:08:01 AM AEST
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A wonderful write. It is surprisingly beautiful..
An excellent conclusion. .dear Tanna I appreciate your talent..Venkat |
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Re: It's All Black and White
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by roisin on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 10:59:01 PM AEST
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| EXCELLENT!! ta ...rosie |
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