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create freedom
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 03:10:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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a line up at the soup kitchen and another starving man
waiting for a sandwitch since we cant live off the land
sleeping in the ditch or another cardboard bed
would rather live in the bush kill to be fed
no admitance no trespassing goverment land
didnt god creat this for us with a caring hand
barbed wire fences and rules for the park
telling us what we do in the dark
this is our world we should do as we wish
we should be able to have a right to fish
but tax us to death and raise the price high
pretty soon us poor will all die
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Re: create freedom
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:24:19 AM AEST
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| Another great write, very raw and truthful. I just read your other write. We need a revolution in this country. Somethings gotta give. Peace to you. Laura |
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Re: create freedom
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by Belcha on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 06:12:55 AM AEST
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excellent poem, you really expressed a feeling felt by thousands of people, opinions are important, its about making it count !
keep it up, more peace and revolution sparking poetry please. |
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