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think your better then me?
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 01:56:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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***** you
and your rightious bull*****
You think your better then me?
Is that it?
That because your older
your also wiser?
I have seen to many things in this life
you will never see
or have to go though what I have
Have you seen your best friend shot
in a drug deal gone bad
Spend 6 months in rehab
then come back
and have no friends
Have your own father hate you
because of your sexuality
I have seen many things
And I know
right from wrong
So take your preaching and shove it
Copyright ©
vampyrekiss
... [
2005-07-11 01:56:34]
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Re: think your better then me?
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 02:06:25 AM AEST
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No one is more importent than any other.
Very sad but written well.
I've never seen these things but I know they exist and it breaks my heart.
sounds like u have reason to feel the way u do.
huggs,
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Re: think your better then me?
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 06:19:50 AM AEST
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i believe that every one is equal and clours, race, etc. DOESN'T matter, because we all look the same underneath!
i like the style of your poem, and the way it flows.
sorry your life hasn't been great.
... hey, by the way, your poem kicks a*s! |
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