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The Way That Only Stars Can
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 12:50:16 AM in AEST
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If I were the sky looking down on you
And saw you looking up at me in sorrow
I would surely make it rain
So you would not have to cry alone
If I ever were heaven and saw alone and sad
I would send you down all my angels
So that one of them could be yours
If I were an angel
The avatar of all your hopes and dreams
I would envelope you up in my wings
I would love you and never let you go
If I were there and you loved me
I would never let you feel passed over
You would never be pushed aside
If it were snowing and I saw you shiver
I would wrap you up in all my warmth
So we could watch the snow together
I have never seen it snow before
If I were the sky and you looked up at me
And I saw that in your eye you had a wish to make
I would make a thousand stars fall just for you
Because I have fallen for you the way
That only stars can
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Re: The Way That Only Stars Can
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 01:19:49 AM AEST
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Celestial.
Simply magical.
*applauds* |
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Re: The Way That Only Stars Can
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 02:34:52 AM AEST
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Incredible dearest john!
So very beautiful, I especially liked the last stanza. I love your word imagery, so powerful and full of meaning.
This was awesome john, you are beyond brilliant.
Hope to you
Rach *smiles* |
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Re: The Way That Only Stars Can
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 02:48:44 AM AEST
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Wow!
this is a heavenly beautifull write.
Really have u never seen it snow?
A heavenly masterpeice of beauty.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: The Way That Only Stars Can
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 03:13:37 AM AEST
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| And i will catch you as only dreams can, a beautiful write...and don't forget the snowboarding (tehehe)...muaw |
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Re: The Way That Only Stars Can
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 03:33:56 AM AEST
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Beautiful piece, I must say. I think this poem tells its message with a straightforwardness and a grace that are not combined very often.
Well done.
Andrew |
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Re: The Way That Only Stars Can
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by Dorkfish on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 12:22:43 PM AEST
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| Wow that was truly beautiful!!! I absolutely loved that one. You have a flare for romance and a talent as well. I would love to hear something like that written for me. Whoever this person is, is very lucky. Great job and you are a wonderful poet!! |
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