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Sonnet #3
Contributed by
MrWrite
on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:32:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The distance grows in every way
Each moment that we are apart
I think about you every day
The girl enshrined within my heart
When you get hurt, I feel the pain
Our souls' connection true and strong
When you're not here, I feel the strain
Like half of myself, though live, is gone
The silence leaves my mind in doubt
About the way you truly feel
I fear I cannot live without
The love that makes my life seem real
I only hope that you still see
That you and I are meant to be
Copyright ©
MrWrite
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2005-07-10 22:32:06]
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Re: Sonnet #3
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:39:40 PM AEST
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An amazing sonnet in that the flow was undisturbed..
your longing is very evident..
great discipline.. and write.
M.O.H. |
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Re: Sonnet #3
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:42:14 PM AEST
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Beautiful.
I especially liked the first stanza, really drew me in.
A write from the heart indeed.
Well done to you. |
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Re: Sonnet #3
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 11:21:01 PM AEST
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Beautifully done Sonnet
Enjoyed it much
Elizabeth Dandy |
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Re: Sonnet #3
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 12:30:14 AM AEST
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Great comeback, Matthew... I love it!!
I have missed your beautiful poems... Glad to see you here again...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Sonnet #3
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by SinginSilence on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 02:24:49 AM AEST
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| A Sonnet! Oh, I do love a good sonnet so thank you . I love writing sonnets, I must confess iambic pentameter can create quite a challenge for me from time to time, i sometimes just forget about it, but i think you did a good job with it. I only ask you for some end punctuation, maybe a comma or period so it reads better. |
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