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The Leaders Of It all
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:28:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Several have wasted life..
exploited time and ignorance
with no needs and in no hurry
to make use of their brilliant faculties,
nor the knowledge of consciousness.
Men fraught, with vacant eyes
like summer nights - red and black..
steel studded with Gold Stars..
their faces distorted,
cruel and ablaze.
Some are young-
endowed with terrifying voices
and dangerous resources..
sent up.. cursing the World,
tricked out with nauseating luxury;
seeking some violent paradise
under a ferocious grimace!
Dressed.. improvised costumes-
like something out of a bad dream,
they enact Heroic Romances.
Brigades of demigods and demons...
more spirited than any history
or religion has ever been.
Morning makes them sick!
Faces reddened by pain..
quivering.. sunburst flesh-
wounds of black and scarlet..
dancing 'round the vision.
Hurling on Mother Beauty..
She recoils and rears up.. but is taken.
Slice claws and razor flesh
Bones crushed in gleaming fangs, murdered..
by The Leaders Of It All!
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Re: The Leaders Of It all
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:44:57 PM AEST
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Very deep content.
But I think it is amazing all the same, your words are incredible and you never cease to grab my attention!
Keep it up Billy! oR else lol |
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Re: The Leaders Of It all
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by wizard on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:47:19 PM AEST
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very strong feelings here.
a subtle summation..yet not so subtle that your message wasn't clear. brilliant.
the sixth stanza was great:
'Morning makes them sick!
Faces reddened by pain..
quivering.. sunburst flesh-
wounds of black and scarlet..
dancing 'round the vision.'
an excellent post bro.
wizard
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Re: The Leaders Of It all
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 12:13:46 AM AEST
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a blood chilling reality this poem of darkness is saturated with thruth and dispicable but
true events of the past the present, and unfortunately i suspect, the future, well done
bill . . .
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Re: The Leaders Of It all
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 12:51:32 AM AEST
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wow very deep.
good write |
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Re: The Leaders Of It all
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 05:38:28 AM AEST
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I always love your writing
very very deep
really have to baffle a line and that shows
your knowledge your a very good writer
so keep my mind working keep writing
Joey>CT |
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Re: The Leaders Of It all
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 06:15:57 AM AEST
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Very powerfull, thought provoking write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Leaders Of It all
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by brew on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 09:50:42 AM AEST
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WOW...............claps........such work. Well written, and strong stanzas. Just wow.once again.
Brew~ |
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Re: The Leaders Of It all
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by sprinter27 on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 12:30:34 PM AEST
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good write. i liked reading this a lot. it goes very deep, i like that. and it makes sense to me. good work! keep it up!
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Re: The Leaders Of It all
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 05:25:37 PM AEST
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Wow MOH...this is deep...lots of venom in this powerful write. Great job expressing yourself.
Scorp. |
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Re: The Leaders Of It all
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 03:02:24 AM AEST
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The rawness of the truth is almost overpowering. Leaving a quivering fear of 'what if and probably so'. Excellent.
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