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Goodnight, World
Contributed by
sprinter27
on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:15:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Goodnight, all
I’m taking my fall
Stepping off the ledge
Falling off the edge
I’m going to fall to my death,
And say goodbye to this stress
Goodnight is now goodbye
I am about to die
There is no one to catch me
I am alone, I do believe
No one in sight,
Doesn’t seem right,
But since I’m alone
It’s my chance to go
My chance to let go of it all
It’s my chance to just drop and fall,
Let go of everything I knew
And just leave you
So, goodnight and goodbye, all
It is my time to fall
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sprinter27
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2005-07-10 22:15:22]
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Re: Goodnight, World
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:33:16 PM AEST
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Sprints...
I implore you to know and understand that people are here for ya..
I got ya back.. anytime you wanna chat-
great write but..ya left me with my heart in my throat- : (
Thoughts and Prayers to you..
B
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Re: Goodnight, World
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by Bones on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 02:33:34 PM AEST
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First of all let me say this: This has to be one of the most darkest and most suicidal poems I've ever read. And trust me, I've read alot of them. You seem to present your message in this one straight forward. But there's always different ways to handle stress. I myself find it nice to meditate to relieve myself of day-to-day worries and stress. It's always best to handle stress in a healthy way, not a way that harms you or others...
Peace,
Bones
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