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If I were, You would be
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 09:50:34 PM in AEST
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If I were the sun you would be the flower
I would shine my light on you
And leave so that you would be nourished by the rain
So I could come back and gaze upon your beauty
All I want is to see you in full bloom
When you would no longer be with a budded stem
I would always wonder if you would bloom just
For me so I would not have to share you with the moon
If I were the rain I would chose to fall on you
My beautiful flower I would want to give you life
And would want to forever
Caress and be inside you from bud to root
If I were a song bird you would be my song
You would be what you are now
The only thing beautiful in me
If I were the sword you would be the stone
The keeper of my heart my one and only home
If I were ever in need a miracle
You would be my angel
You would give me back my faith
You would be the reason for me to want to live
I want us to forever be connected
I would not be without you
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Re: If I were, You would be
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 12:18:34 AM AEST
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nice tribute well done dorien beautifly spoken . . .
Ben |
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Re: If I were, You would be
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 02:43:14 AM AEST
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Amazing.
Full of love.
Eloquent words dear john. |
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Re: If I were, You would be
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 03:00:16 AM AEST
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| If you were a tree i would take shelter in your shade, and find safety within your high branches....a beautiful write babe. muaw |
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Re: If I were, You would be
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 03:02:40 AM AEST
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Your girl is fortunate to have u.
Such passion in your words just wipes away the cares of the day.
U have a heart, mind, body-n-soul bigger than Texas.
A masterpeice of beauty that only heaven could produce.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: If I were, You would be
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by Dorkfish on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 12:25:05 PM AEST
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| WOW!! Again, truly romantic. Very sweet poem. |
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Re: If I were, You would be
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by SylviaWalters on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 02:50:39 AM AEST
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| wow.... great... keep up the good work! |
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