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Contributed by Diastro on Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 01:22:39 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I open my mouth to speak
but no words come out.
I open my eyes to see
but no images appear.
I opened my heart to you
you turned and walked away.
I open up my chest
and pull out the pain
I spread out!
spread out on my bed
I held!
I held my aching head
I screamed!
No one heard my calls
You beat me!
and laughed at my falls!
No longer will I try!
Black and blue
waiting for you
I can see what you say isn't true
Open for me
Open for you
Serrated
Shattered
Torn straight through
I opened up the door
and no one was around
I fell on my face
you left me on the ground
I bled through the bandages
from the cuts that you made
I pretend to dream
The images fade
I run from the sun
and hide in the shade.
Broken teeth
shatted bones
a broken heart
that no one owns
I hate!
What you've done to me
Iv'e shown you
but you still can't see.
I hope you choke
on the pills that you take
a coated life
all too fake

Copyright © Diastro ... [ 2002-07-23 13:22:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Opened (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 01:54:57 AM AEST
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I believe that when writing your deepest dark emotion, it helps ...
a fine write

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