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Lost
Contributed by
rhyrhy
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Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 09:17:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm lost in this world
I dont know where I should be
I'm stuck between living a life or a dream
I know i should be here with you, but i also want to be free
Free from the pain, the confusion, the hate, and the emptyness
You make me feel special, like no one else is in the world except for you and me.
But you want me to fufill my dream
To do that I would loose you, and loosing you would be so hard for me and make my heart confused.
See now i dont know what to do
You put me in this place where I cant make up my mind
I wanna make you proud, but to do that you would have to be around.
Take this pain away from me. I need you, I want you cant you see?
To hold me tight and live my dream.
Which one should I be?
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rhyrhy
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2005-07-10 21:17:20]
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Re: Lost
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by RoxyGirl on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 02:06:05 AM AEST
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Follow your heart and just hold on.And witch ever one you pick remeber pain will hill.
LOVE ALWAYS YOUR FRIEND
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Re: Lost
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by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 12:49:17 PM AEST
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| That was good. you have a lot of pain, I'm sorry. Feel better, but keep up the great writes! |
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