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Top Of The World
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
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Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 09:09:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Hush me to sleep -
In a lullaby for dreamers.
And when the stars fall,
Make a wish, you seeker.
As fire blazes across the midnight sky,
Hold your breath, you hopeful.
When the sun sets,
Close your eyes, you angel,
And anticipate for the clouds to hear your plea.
In the morning hours,
When the clock is turning,
Stop for a moment
And visualize your dreams,
So close you can taste them
On the tip of your expectant tongue.
Waiting for the moment,
For the perfect time
To gather all your dreams and run.
Straight for desire,
Straight into fantasy.
Straight into illusion,
Hoping not to fall.
And when you reach that dream, sweet doll,
Tell me how the top of the world feels,
Before you lose it all.
Copyright ©
xxbreathlessx
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2005-07-10 21:09:22]
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Re: Top Of The World
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:15:52 PM AEST
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This is an excellent piece...Great visuals, and I love your wording in this write. Great job!!
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Re: Top Of The World
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 06:29:41 AM AEST
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that was very nice
the poem flowed just great
and I liked your style of expression
give you a fat 5 |
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Re: Top Of The World
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by remote on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 07:18:59 AM AEST
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| This is quite mesmerizing lullaby kind of poem. |
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Re: Top Of The World
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by DreamPoetess on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 10:40:22 AM AEST
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cheezy votes, readers, oh my dreams, this is absolutely gorgeous, write for my mind too:>
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I cannot wake, it would be too much like sleeping in a world of pillow fighters, they lose the feathers of their minds:>
Meagan writes:> |
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