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just enough
Contributed by
brokenwings
on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:36:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I have waited on you for so long now,
the words are stuck in my head I don't know how
to tell you how i feel, when you are around, i cannot speak
and my knees get all weak
your eyes tell me you'll love me forever
your smile makes my darkest fear history,
i only have one thing to fear now,
if you don't feel the same, i will go insain
you dont' have to speak of your heart
you don't have to hold me when i cry
just knowing you care is enough..
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2005-07-10 20:36:13]
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Re: just enough
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 12:43:18 AM AEST
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Caring is the diamond of emotions to a women, how beautiful you write . . .
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Re: just enough
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by vampyrekiss on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 01:03:51 AM AEST
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It was good, one thing well two, Your spelling, Im not gonna brag about me but just a idea next theres really no ending. It just kinda ends but its still bomb good write and cant wait to real more
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Re: just enough
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by vampyrekiss on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 01:06:41 AM AEST
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| Haha i say you need to work on your spelling but then I go and ***** up my grammer :) I meant Im not gonna brag about MINE and i cant wait to READ your next one :) |
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Re: just enough
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by RoxyGirl on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 01:17:43 AM AEST
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very beautiful. love and care will alway be enought. just stick with your heart.and always make her smile
LOVE ALWAYS FRIEND
ROXYGIRL |
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Re: just enough
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 06:03:10 AM AEST
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good writing
where's the endind
make a part two? |
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