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A Dialogue With My Heart
Contributed by
bhav
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Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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"Oh! Bhavik , why are you feeling so low ? "
"Whose that ? " I ask .
"It's me your dear heart , I just couldn't bear it any longer
to see you face people breaking me into parts. "
"Every time someone broke me ,you cried and people said
"He is crying out his heart ."
"You stood by me Bhavik, you never left me ,"
you always said, "You are mine and meant it every time ."
I asked "why do you speak to me after so many years ?"
"You could have spoken to me before "
"Bhavik , at one time you gave your heart i.e. me, to all
but never received one ."
"Today I will speak with you once and then cease to speak."
This is just to tell you "I love you Bhavik, for what you are .
even thou when no one will love you ,
I will , always will .
That's a promise ."
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2003-01-09 19:00:00]
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Re: A Dialogue With My Heart
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by AzurePaladin on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 07:09:29 PM AEST
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| Nice write!! Well thought out.... :) I enjoyed it. |
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Re: A Dialogue With My Heart
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 07:43:09 PM AEST
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| good write i enjoyed it very much |
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Re: A Dialogue With My Heart
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by bhav on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 12:50:05 AM AEST
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| thanks,AzurePaladin for liking my poem .hope to keeping on writing better in the coming days . |
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Re: A Dialogue With My Heart
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by bhav on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 12:52:11 AM AEST
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| thanks,Ilhar for liking my poem .hope that u will like my forthcoming poems too. |
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