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Devil In Disguise
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 07:43:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You are the devil in disguise,
Filling my mind with your lies,
Twisting me round your finger,
Inside me your stench will linger.
Your emptiness filling my soul,
I am the star in your role,
I am your dark shadow,
Suffering your deadly blow.
I choke under your black cloak,
Suffocating beneath your smoke,
I cling to what I used to be,
Clinging to a somewhat former me.
I dance dressed in your disgust,
Disappearing into the fire & dust,
Hiding away from all humanity,
My body covered in your profanity.
I belong now in your world,
Slowly dying as your power unfurls,
I scream out no-one hears,
As into my tainted soul you peer.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-07-10 19:43:57]
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Re: Devil In Disguise
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by Lyssa on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 07:50:18 PM AEST
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| Thats a really good write. |
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Re: Devil In Disguise
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by shelby on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:21:56 PM AEST
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oh Pix this is so dark and sad hope your ok
((HUGSSSS))
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Re: Devil In Disguise
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 09:06:23 PM AEST
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your writing is awsome
but this is just a lil.
too dark for me |
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Re: Devil In Disguise
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:03:59 PM AEST
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I thoroughly enjoyed this write Pix...wow. Your emotional struggle is so clearly evident in this piece...very well done. The third stanza stood out the most for me. Great job!
Scorp. |
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Re: Devil In Disguise
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 12:59:45 AM AEST
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there's a crevace in the heart of this poem that one dare not go to close to the edge, a
very riveting feel to this lots of emotional depth in theses words . . .
Ben |
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Re: Devil In Disguise
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 05:01:23 PM AEST
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The first stanza really stood out more, but overall the poem itself rocks. It's emotionaly perfect.
Good one Krissie.
Jane xxx |
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