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A BLUR
Contributed by
diamond_tears
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Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 07:10:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I have turned into,
A blur,
In the fog of life.
Not noticed,
Amongst the chaos.
Please don't pass me by.
Cut me up today,
Bury me tomorrow.
No-one will notice,
By next week,
By next year,
When I have rotted.
Dead,
Like the flowers in my mind,
Screaming to be seen.
Let me rest,
Leave me in peace.
Allow me to escape,
This pain I have to endure.
I am nothing,
Leave it that way,
It's best for everyone.
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diamond_tears
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2005-07-10 19:10:02]
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Re: A BLUR
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by pixie on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 07:51:36 PM AEST
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a very moving and emotional poem, well written
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Re: A BLUR
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 05:49:20 AM AEST
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| awesome, well done!!! |
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Re: A BLUR
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by True-to-the-Heart on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:47:02 AM AEST
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This is release more than actual poetry..
its very worrying...
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