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�j�ning framt��arinnar
Contributed by
kolbrun
on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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�essi ver�ld � dag, �essi dau�a ganga,
vi� h�ldum �fram sem hlekkja�ir fangar.
Hvert l�fsins barn sem f��ist h�r,
ekkert �ess b��ur nema heimsins ey�inga her.
Himinninn er fallinn, f�r hann af braut,
fjandinn sj�lfur, �etta er hin versta �raut.
Hi� s��asta bl�m ber hi� s��asta fr�,
allt ver�ur b�i� ef �a� sekkur � s�.
�� skal berjast, �� skal �j�st,
vont ver�ur a� koma, �� �ekkiru �st.
S�num samst��u, sameinumst �ll,
siglum �fram og vinnum okkar v�ll.
Copyright ©
kolbrun
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2003-01-09 18:20:00]
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Re: �j�ning framt��arinnar
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 09:35:32 PM AEST
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| i dont understand it true, but it seems to be a wonderful poem |
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Re: �j�ning framt��arinnar
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by aernby on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 11:21:35 PM AEST
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wish i understood better--the poem seems intricate -- aliteration, and word play some a t least have break mid line --- much like anglo-saxon poetry.
good write
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Re: �j�ning framt��arinnar
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by kolbrun on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 05:54:49 AM AEST
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| thank you..........=) |
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Re: �j�ning framt��arinnar
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by kolbrun on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 05:55:33 AM AEST
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| thank you........... =) |
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Re: �j�ning framt��arinnar
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by Lia on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 11:48:24 PM AEST
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| I don't have the first clue of what this says..but..I don't need to. It's absolutely beautiful. It could be a bunch of gibberish for all i care..the look, the feel, it's just...beautiful... |
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Re: �j�ning framt��arinnar
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by maria_mendonez_ibardolas on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 08:27:55 AM AEST
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| hehehehehehe I think this is the best poem that I ever read. I have no clue at all but just stare at some of the words written in your language.Wish I could understand it but I guess there is no chance for that.Anyway its still lovely,I guess so? |
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Re: �j�ning framt��arinnar
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 07:25:53 AM AEST
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very nice, great write.
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Re: �j�ning framt��arinnar
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by Gribba on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 06:00:43 AM AEST
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�etta er �tr�lega flott hj� ��r...
�essar l�nur
"�essi ver�ld � dag, �essi dau�a ganga,
vi� h�ldum �fram sem hlekkja�ir fangar.
Hvert l�fsins barn sem f��ist h�r,
ekkert �ess b��ur nema heimsins ey�inga her. "
�g bara f�ll fyrir �eim...
�hrifamiki� og sterkt!!!
n�sta erindi er einnig jafn �hrifa miki� en �a� fyrsta bara skellur � andliti� � manni...
var�andi s��asta erindi� finnst m�r tv�r s��ustu l�nurnar ekki alveg vi�eigandi, draga svol�t� �r �hrifum lj��sins...
en pers�nulega finnst m�r a� lj��i� �tti a� enda � �essu:
"�� skal berjast, �� skal �j�st,
vont ver�ur a� koma, �� �ekkiru �st. "
ef m�gulegt er a� setja eitthva� � undan svo lj��i haldi sinni upprunalegu mynd og formi.
En annars geggja� flott lj��!!! |
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