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Afternoon Storms

Contributed by brew on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:23:23 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry



Sitting on the front porch, on a cloudy day
The skiies, are turning a dark gray and churning above
I sit back and wonder what a storm this one could be
The wind, begins blowing hard, and a has a cold chill, to it
Soon the air smells like rain, the lightening strikes, and thunder roars
I wonder: Should I take cover........or just sit back and let nature take it course?!
Soon the wind chimes, begin to chime......... swinging back and forth as they rhyme
I take a step, towards the steps....to watch in the horizon as the storm rumbles closer
My heart begins beating faster, as I will soon be in the rain storm that will change the day
There it is........with its colliding winds, symetrical force and part of natures worse, and best!
This certain storm, does no harm; Just letting all things take in the water and keep growing
It has now gone............Fast and Furious, yet soft and gentle..............................





Copyright © brew ... [ 2005-07-10 18:23:23]
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Re: Afternoon Storms (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:28:07 PM AEST
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breath taking write thanks for taking me there with you I love the rain and the freshness it brings
ps ( dont get hit by lightning though) smiles
Michelle


Re: Afternoon Storms (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:42:38 PM AEST
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what an excellent write...your description is very vivid.

wiz


Re: Afternoon Storms (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:44:34 PM AEST
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wow brew...this was magnificent!
I now await the next rainstorm!

I'm always asking my friends whether or not they can smell moisture in the air..(rain and snow alike)
and they tell me I'm crazy!

I knew I smelled it!..lol
thanks for clearing that up for me-
and for sharing this most vivid and idealistic write..
5 stars on this..


B


Re: Afternoon Storms (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 09:23:31 PM AEST
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Its the ions we smell cleansing the particles in the air. I love storms and that smell and the power in the storm moving through my body. The droplets cleansing everything and washing us pure and clean again. Brilliant write.

Rita


Re: Afternoon Storms (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 05:49:05 AM AEST
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Nice job man

it flowed alright a lil choppy but well thought out and thats what counts
keep up the good work


Re: Afternoon Storms (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 04:46:30 PM AEST
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Ah Brew..this is such a lovely picture you painted here..Great imagery..Loved it
Jenni


Re: Afternoon Storms (User Rating: 1 )
by harlot20 on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 06:25:55 PM AEST
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hmmm good imagery, i loved the reference to the wind chimes, over all a really good read for a poem




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