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Racing Life
Contributed by
forsaken_soul33
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Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 05:52:07 PM in AEST
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I remember that dreadful night,
When I called you house,
And I began to cry.
The phone rang all night,
Was I to late to save your life?
I ran out of my house,
And got into my car,
It was almost out of gas,
I knew I wouldn't get far.
I drove fast,
Wondering if you were still alive.
The car stops,
It's out of gas.
Your house is still far,
So I run fast.
I leave my car,
And start to pray,
That you will see another day.
I stop on front lawn,
My heart skips a beat,
Then starts to pound hard.
Tears race eachother down my face,
Then hit the floor,
Where they leave their mark.
I rush in your house,
And climb up the stairs.
I see your room door,
It seems to far.
I turn the knob,
But the door is locked.
I ram the door with all my stregth,
The tears flow faster down my face.
The door bursts open,
And I tumble in.
I see you on the floor,
The moonlight makes you look,
Pale yet blue.
I see pills by your side.
I pick you up and hold you close,
Hoping that, you, Heaven may restore,
And bring back life.
My tears fall on your face,
And leave a trace,
Of the pain and sorrow I feel,
On your very last day.
I put you down and call an ambulance,
I ask the doctor if you will live.
And with one sad look,
I understood.
That you were gone,
The girl I loved for so long.
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Re: Racing Life
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by shelby on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:35:00 PM AEST
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had my heart racing this is so very sad Im sorry that this happened to you I relate to this a very hard thing to go through
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Re: Racing Life
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by mom11159 on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 11:48:11 AM AEST
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OMG How tragic and so very very sad brought tears to my eyes and heart I am so very sorry for your loss. Your words displayed exactly what you went through beat by beat Excellent poem for such a sad situation.
Cathy |
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Re: Racing Life
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by Mikayla on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 05:17:47 PM AEST
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OMG!
i am so sorry
this poem made me cry
i read it because i saw your comment to a poem saying to read it so i did it!
sorry
hang in there
i loved this poem so much that i printed it.
bye now *Mikayla*
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Re: Racing Life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 02:34:14 AM AEST
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You did your best within those seconds, I pray you are well. I will pray for you with my beating heart. I know that heartbeat too well. I pray the girl you loved for so long was saved... I understand no one can save a soul after it has passed on. I pray you are saved, hugs from me, raquelLeah..
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Re: Racing Life
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by Drapes on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 09:09:28 PM AEST
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Wow. I am so sorry... It's such a great poem but such a terrible shame. I really am very sorry for you. It made me so sad just reading it... imagin it actually happening...
Wonderful write.
With love,
-Drapes |
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