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The Virgin
Contributed by
zenaprincess
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Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 05:23:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Your virgin hands were searching,
Your virgin lips were hot.
Your eyes were longingly gazing,
Your words were sweet and soft.
You said that I was beautiful,
You said you were in love.
You took what you wanted and left me,
Your silence was too much.
You said that it was so wrong,
You said you’d had enough.
You said you’d always be there but
You couldn’t ever be stuffed.
You took my heart and crushed it,
You used me and abused.
You said that now you hated me,
You totally messed me up.
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Re: The Virgin
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:02:23 PM AEST
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I'm sorry for this. It has to be tough. This is an emotional write though. Nice job...
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Re: The Virgin
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by gwenevere on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:07:19 PM AEST
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| sorry for your hurt.good poem, Ros |
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Re: The Virgin
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by forsaken_soul33 on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:37:02 PM AEST
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I'm sorry that you are hurt. Things happen, and we don't know how to solve them or deal with them at times. well, it was a really good poem and was full of emotion. keep it up.
bye,
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