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Obscure
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 04:43:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Picture frames...empty
memory box...full
Our future...finished
new life...started
All hope...lost
my reality...found
Dreams...shattered
hearts...mending
Feelings...dead
mind...alive
Foolhardy...sad
painfully aware...happy
Misconceptions...dried up
perceptions...flowing
Possibilities...open
your mind...closed
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Re: Obscure
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by jyssvw22 on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 05:09:18 PM AEST
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i see what you getting at here scorp
a good write that illuminates good ideas and thoughts
nice as always
cant wait for more...... |
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Re: Obscure
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by BloodyTearDrops on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:09:16 PM AEST
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I Liked It . It Is The First One I Have Read Of Yours And It Makes Me Want To Read More.
.:Chelsey:. |
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Re: Obscure
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:28:53 PM AEST
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Scorp, so truly talented delievers another fantastic, creative write. Always a pleasure to read ur brillant work.
Hugs,
Dreamer |
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Re: Obscure
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by Kie on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:45:33 PM AEST
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Between those ... lie something, powerful, intense and mysterious.
This has a unique signature that is resounding.
Kie |
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Re: Obscure
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by pixie on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 07:50:14 PM AEST
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considering you wrote that super fast, it was amazing, well done!!!
pix xx |
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Re: Obscure
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:16:29 PM AEST
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I feel ya Scorp..
sometimes a few words is all it takes.
Thoughts and prayers to you..
B |
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Re: Obscure
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:25:05 PM AEST
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Great job
You are the best at making
my noodle cook I LOVE the 1st stanza
pulled me right in
So simple but complex too
your amazing MUH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Joey |
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Re: Obscure
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by wizard on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:33:06 PM AEST
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such a befitting title.
i love the format of this...and the message.
i like the brevity of it all.
new beginnings can be tough..but they are what you make them...make this one great!
wizard |
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Re: Obscure
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 09:28:56 PM AEST
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| THis was powerful man. The first time I read it, I could almost feel it being shouted out. The second time was like getting slapped with words, right in the face. I loved that. Great write. Peace to you. Laura |
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Re: Obscure
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 09:32:10 PM AEST
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Splendid!!! And life goes on, finally.
Rita |
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Re: Obscure
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:13:40 PM AEST
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Interesting and so insightful..
Good work,
Jenni |
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Re: Obscure
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by Arden on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 11:20:23 PM AEST
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well i didnt expect much.
the poem was ok.
the periods got annoying quickly and there wasnt really much emotion in the poem. this poem could be amazing if it were reworked.
but thats just my opinion.
3/5
sorry
-Rebekah |
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Re: Obscure
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 12:35:08 AM AEST
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| I must admit Scorp, it's So Ironic, nothing annoying about this poem at all. Speaking your mind is very interesting when you do it and you speak it so well. Very dynamic!!! |
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Re: Obscure
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 01:18:31 AM AEST
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nice change of pace scorp and i can read between the lines, well done . . .
Ben |
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Re: Obscure
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by Dorkfish on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:08:03 PM AEST
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| Don't underestimate yourself. Fast or thoughtout, your work is amazing. That was a good collection of your thoughts formed into a working poem. Very good. |
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Re: Obscure
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 27th August 2020 @ 02:10:29 PM AEST
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The tragedy of life............
And the reality as well. |
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