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Monsters are Born
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 03:19:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Thoughts and Senses float
Creeping through this body shell
Without reason or call
They come crawling
Pushing out the Good and reasonable
Leavening only the Negative behind
A single mind
Ones Most powerful tool
Some Weak
Some Strong
The Human Mind is without define
The realms it Cultivates and Controls
Fanciful Dreams to Addition Wants
But the Evil Mind is the most baffling of all
Each born inside a Mothers Womb
Each Struggle fought
for that first step
Alone
These Children grow.
Were they just considered mean?
Could they not have been seen as who
they really are?
Scheming, Calculating, Menacing,
Plotting, Comminate,
Destructive Monsters
Bursting at the seams.
What runs in their veins
Acid or Pure pain
Their vision of this already scary world
and its meaning constantly
Distorted Preverted some how.
Evil, Mencing, Monsters
With nothing but killing on their minds
Feelings and senses
Worst then any Special Effects Show
Fire and Brimstone plumping their souls.
Whisper
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2005-07-10 15:19:57]
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Re: Monsters are Born
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by Kitty06 on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 04:15:17 PM AEST
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| This poem is amazing. My interpretation was that this poem is asking the question that is on most people's minds today: How do everyday people become the evil tyrants that we call terrorists today. I feel that the fifth stanza is what emphasises this idea the strongest. An overall excellent poem. |
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Re: Monsters are Born
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by zenaprincess on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 04:15:50 PM AEST
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| hmmmm - i found this thought provoking. Very well written - "the evil mind is the most baffling of all". love that line. Well done. |
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