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The Storm
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 02:34:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Spirit dark as black as night
Sit and contemplate my plight
Imaginings run through my head
Heart is beating, full of dread
Storms are raging all around
Hope of living, can't be found
Lightning, flashing in my hell
Dark and deep as deepest well
Smell the burning, feel the heat
Despair is waiting at my feet
Take me now and end this pain
I can hear deaths sweet refrain
Wind is howling, Calling me
Come and set my spirit free
Oh my god, a wondrous sight
Out of darkness, into light
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gwenevere
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Re: The Storm
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by Kitty06 on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 04:01:44 PM AEST
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| This poem is very descriptive. The choice of words for the rhyming is great, they don't sound forced and the wording isn't rearranged to acheive any of the rhymes. A great write. |
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Re: The Storm
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:01:14 PM AEST
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written so very well Ros..
last stanza was a poem within itself-
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Re: The Storm
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by wizard on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:25:37 PM AEST
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great write...excellent flow and imagery...
the third stanza was my favorite, although all were good. you said this was different for you, apparently, change is good!!
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Re: The Storm
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by secretwind on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 12:15:54 AM AEST
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darkly done
like the flow of it |
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Re: The Storm
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by TeRrahiel on
Saturday, 23rd May 2009 @ 11:46:34 AM AEST
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| It's really awesome. I think you have a skill that can be rarely found - using rhymes that don't interrupt conveying of the message. It's absolutely a five:) |
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