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The Devil
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 01:05:18 PM in AEST
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Hey ,you now, watch out, watch out
Can't you see Devil's about
You must never let him win
He will lead you into sin
All the things you shouldn't do
He will place in front of you
Play's the fiddle all day long
Tries to get you to do wrong
Temptation each and every day
Go on, do it, he will say
Tapping on your shoulder hard
Hopes to win the evil card
Do not listen to the sound
Of his voice, the underground
Do not let his sin take root
Kick him out with your big boot
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gwenevere
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Re: The Devil
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by bernard on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 01:42:11 PM AEST
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| Gwenevere I just love this one I have been fighting this devil all of my life. I will have to wait and see if I have been successful or not. Bernard |
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Re: The Devil
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by zenaprincess on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 01:46:32 PM AEST
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| love this! i like the rhythm and how its kind of upbeat although whilst still being all about EVIL!!! Cool. Well done |
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Re: The Devil
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by forsaken_soul33 on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:18:00 PM AEST
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This poem sounded cool. Great job. You did a godd job with the rhymes.
bye,
☺Mando☺ |
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Re: The Devil
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by wizard on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:16:21 PM AEST
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i know his ways all too well...you've summed it up greatly.
wizard |
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