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My Forgotten Pain
Contributed by
gfreek79
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Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 12:19:56 PM in AEST
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Hidden from the world to see
No one understands the real me
The evil demon that craves pain
And her deadly screams in the rain
As I cut her wrist and see her bleed
Her black soul forever freed
Her screams sound so real and so known
Maybe because it was once me who’d moan
“God please save me� into the night
But he never did and now I’ve taken flight
To haunt others and take them away
To a hell where they will eternally stay
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gfreek79
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2005-07-10 12:19:56]
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Re: My Forgotten Pain
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 04:07:41 PM AEST
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At your age I too thought no one understood me..and maybe they didn't... Good write tho..
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Re: My Forgotten Pain
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by Kitty06 on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 04:41:28 PM AEST
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| This poem reverberates of the pain and suffering that cutters feel. A wonderfully morbid write, keep it up. |
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