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Dying Rose
Contributed by
skinney86
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Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 12:20:35 AM in AEST
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oops
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The rose petals fall slowly to the ground
As I hold the weathered flower close to me
Thinking of the time you gave me the flower
When it was so full of color, so full of life...
That very flower you gave me is dying now,
The petals falling apart, like my very life
As I stand here, tear eyed
Looking down upon your face
I wonder how this could have happened
How you could have left me here all alone
Leaving me standing here with a dying rose,
A rose which was just alive days ago..
Days when you were here with me also
But you aren't with me anymore,
and all i'm left with is this dying rose
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2005-07-10 00:20:35]
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Re: Dying Rose
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by libra on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 12:24:17 AM AEST
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not to sound mean, but you make it seem like we don't care about love poems.
some of us thrive on love poems. i like this one |
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Re: Dying Rose
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by Skinney86 on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 12:25:41 AM AEST
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| no no i didn't mean it like that at all... I was meaning it as yet another one of my love poems. |
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Re: Dying Rose
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by Benny14 on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 12:48:49 AM AEST
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| very good girly! i really liked the ending...and by like i mean it made me feel the appropriate amount of sadness |
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Re: Dying Rose
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by Chubs on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 12:56:51 AM AEST
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| this was good. it has actually inspired me to write a peom. not many peoms inspire me to do so. |
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