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Old Friend, New Stranger
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 11:22:06 PM in AEST
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You have transformed, wow
You are a new stranger now
Gone from old friend to new stranger
And filled me with all of my anger
We were once best friends
Said we would be until the end
Holding each other into the night
Saying everything would be all right
Comforting each other with soft words
Listening to the beautiful birds
It has all grown cold
And to you, probably, old
Everything that you once said
Is now floating around in my head
Everything you said about me and you
Had always seemed so true
Promising that until the end
We would always be friends
But now I looked at you
I don’t know what to do
You have transformed and left me
You hurt me and left me feeling deceived
So now when I look at you
I know the old you isn’t true
Gone from old friend to new stranger
And filled me with all of my anger
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Re: Old Friend, New Stranger
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 11:30:55 PM AEST
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Heartfelt, sad and full of regret, this goes straight to the soul.
Very well written
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Re: Old Friend, New Stranger
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 11:34:21 PM AEST
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A very touching poem....I am sorry for your hurt..
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Re: Old Friend, New Stranger
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by zenaprincess on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 09:10:36 AM AEST
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| i know this experience and you describe the hurt and emotion beautifully. Well done. |
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Re: Old Friend, New Stranger
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by Bones on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 09:48:37 AM AEST
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Good poem. Alot of emotion in this one, too. Nice rhyme scheme. I haven't seen that type of rhyme scheme since Skunk wrote songs for Sin's Perfection instead of Zach. lol But really, that is a good poem. Keep writing and don't let some former friend take you down under.
Peace,
Bones
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NEVER LET IT GO |
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Re: Old Friend, New Stranger
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by Kie on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:53:25 AM AEST
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When a relationship ends there has to be (at least for a time) some distance so that time can do what it does best---helping us to move on.
Yet this gives me something to ponder on the very realistic scenario where an old friend becomes a new stranger. It seems inevitable.
This one goes straight to the heart.
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Re: Old Friend, New Stranger
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 07:06:59 PM AEST
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Things change..
and so do people.
It's how we deal with the change that matters..
Very heartfelt write Sprints..
B |
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