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Everything Dances
Contributed by
harlot20
on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 07:54:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Take me up, up, up.
So i can't see mirrors in my room.
And the world whips up in a frenzy in the whips of the winds.
The music of the world, of life itself singing.
But who hears it?
Bring up the blooms and flowers.
Tug and tuck at the leaves.
Gardens left to grow free hold such mystery.
My playground all around me.
Leaving cuts and sores on my skin.
And everything dances again.
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harlot20
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2005-07-09 19:54:02] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Everything Dances
(User Rating: 1 ) by waos on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 12:22:04 AM AEST (User
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That was quite interesting, I really liked it. The unique style and
word choice and just the images it brought out in my mind. I shall
keep my eye out for your work from now on.
~Kara |
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