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The Lake (Ghazal)
Contributed by
Cynthia
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Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 07:23:35 PM in AEST
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Sitting down by the lake
Where I like to eat steak.
I watch the gulls fly by
And tease them with my cake.
I put my feet in the water
Got bitten by a snake.
Watch the fish swim quickly
As I start to shake.
The water feels extremely cold
As I sit here and eat my cake.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
June.25/2005
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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2005-07-09 19:23:35]
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Re: The Lake (Ghazal)
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by inoc on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 08:04:56 PM AEST
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I thought this was cute...[if that is the right word!?]
I hate snakes but love eating cake...
I enjoyed this light hearted poem Cynthia
well done ...do some more like this they are ...cute....or something?
coni
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Re: The Lake (Ghazal)
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 09:47:19 PM AEST
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very picturesque like the vivdness it created in my mind . . .
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Re: The Lake (Ghazal)
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 11:10:16 PM AEST
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This is so cute, Sissy. Tell you what. While you are tending to the snake, I will take care of the cake for you and you can tend your snake bite. Deal???????? lololol
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