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Creative hands
Contributed by
mindset
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Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 02:51:34 PM in AEST
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As humans we stand and think
In our hands a place to create
We hold the inside to shape whats real
Every day we stand in thought
Our hands a forward to understand
We are the carpenters with tools of desire
We shape the square a round delight
The universe a control of what's in sight
Insecure we are bold it's our fight
To help those around who have lost sight
Creative hands to change the way
For the many who lose their touch
We can hold the worlds last embrace
And create a new a place of true.
Copyright ©
mindset
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2005-07-09 14:51:34]
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Re: Creative hands
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 04:06:33 PM AEST
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I like where you were going with this write...I might've tweaked it a little bit here and there, but it was enjoyable to read. "Loose" should be "lose". Overall a nice little write. Keep it up!
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Re: Creative hands
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by mindset on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 04:25:53 PM AEST
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thx dood thats constructive i write spontanous and drunk
thats what i admire contructive lightness
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Re: Creative hands
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by mindset on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 04:26:10 PM AEST
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thx dood thats constructive i write spontanous and drunk
thats what i admire constructive lightness
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Re: Creative hands
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 05:01:16 PM AEST
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Good writing
I liked it very drunkly
writin lol |
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