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Skinny
Contributed by
imagenuinefake
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Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 05:12:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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What does it take,
To have that thing?
What does it take,
For me to be thin?
I purge,
I starve,
I rid myself of it all.
But what else does it take?
I cry,
I stab,
I feel.
But what else does it take?
Will I ever feel this way?
Will I ever be so flawless?
Will I ever turn away?
And will I ever learn regardless?
I try my best,
To be so thin.
I try my best,
And still, I never win.
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imagenuinefake
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2005-07-09 05:12:44]
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Re: Skinny
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by Anne-ish on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 01:28:01 PM AEST
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| I sympathize w/ you (or the speaker, if it's not you). God bless. |
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Re: Skinny
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by imagenuinefake on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 06:05:53 PM AEST
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| Oi, I would never ever do that. It's the speaker. :) |
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Re: Skinny
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by Tricky on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 05:48:14 PM AEST
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| For it not being you, you seemed to have captured the essence of someone with an eating disorder. |
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Re: Skinny
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by Anne-ish on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 06:25:15 PM AEST
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| Yeah, I got so totally into it because of your good writing skills. |
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Re: Skinny
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 08:11:45 AM AEST
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i find it annoying when i come across with people with eating disorders..
only because its so hard to help them.
to refuse something we crave so naturally to live
is just not in my logic..
great write x |
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