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~~EnTeR hEAveN~~

Contributed by chaos_01 on Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 02:45:27 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

~~Enter heaven~~

The last tear dropped down
your soulless cheek
As you took your last breath
And the cold slowly took over your warmth

I can feel you above
If I listen closely I hear your voice
I breathe your love

Take a coin to heaven
And buy my life so you
Could look over me
Enter heaven blindly and be surprised

Wait for me patiently I will be there
The time will get trapped in the clouds
We will get trapped in the stars
The warmth made it back to you
Your breath found your lungs
Your soul found your eyes.

~~I BREATH YOU LOVE~~
Rest in peace MUM

Copyright © chaos_01 ... [ 2005-07-09 02:45:27]
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Re: ~~EnTeR hEAveN~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 09:21:15 PM AEST
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Well we can't buy our way into heaven..

There will be no cares of this old world when we get there.. no marriages in heaven.. no boys or girl friends.. just all of Gods little lights..

Its hard at times to have to wait though to see our loved ones.. is what we say and feel now.. but as I said, we won't care.. once we get to our promised land.

Its hard for the living here on earths planet..

I can't wait to see all that glory.. but for now.. God is using me to help others.. and others are helping me as well.. through God...

Thank you for this splendid write..

RLPoetess ; ))

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