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BITTER

Contributed by SPOKENWORDARTIST on Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 01:23:56 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

YES IM BITTER LIKE THE TASTE OF FOUL DISRESPECT THE WAY IT CUTS YOUR SOUL LIKE A RUSTED SAW BACK AND FORWARD ACROSS THE EMOTION OF UNGUARDED TRUST.

LIKE THE WAY YOU SAY I LOVE YOU AND YET YOU CHOOSE TO TAKE THE CHILDREN AWAY FORM ME BECAUSE YOUR NOT FEELING LOVED EMOTIONALLY ON MY PART AS A MAN.

I STEP ONE FOOT IN THE DOOR AND THE DIARY OF YOUR DAY PLAYS LIKE A BAD MOVIE OVER AND OVER AGAIN YOU LOOSE YOUR BREATH ON HOW YOU CANT HANDLE THE KIDS.

YOU SAY I DON’T DO ENUFF FOR YOU AND THAT ALL WE DO IS FIGHT OVER MONEY OR HOW I SHOULD SPEND MORE TIME WITH YOU OH MY PERSONAL FAVORITE WHEN YOU COMPARE ME YOUR LAST BOY FRIEND WAS BETTER MAN THAN ME.

TELL ME WHERE DO I FIT IN THIS WORLD OF YOURS THE WAY I DRESS GET CRITIUQED BY YOU AND YOUR ATTEMP TO MAKE ME OVER AND YES THE WAY I TALK TO YOU IS ALWAYS YOUR RESPONSE.

SHUT UP NOW I WILL TALK AND YOU WILL LISTEN FROM OUR FIRST BORN TILL THE LAST I BEEN DADDY FROM DAY ONE EVEN WITNESS THERE BIRTH AND NEVER WALKOUT ON THEM, I’VE NEVER BEEN AWAY THEM FOR MORE THAN A DAY.

GREW UP TO BE A MAN TAUGHT BY A WOMEN AND THE HARD LESSON OF THE STREET THERES NEVER BEEN A DAY WE HAD NO HEAT, NO LIGHTS, RENT WAS LATE OR FEAR OF EVICTION.

THE HOUSE I BOUGHT WITH TEN YEARS OF SWEAT AND BACK ACHES WAS NEVER GOOD ENUFF FOR YOU AND DIVORCE GIVES IT TO YOU I DIDN’T FIGHT IT BECAUSE MY KIDS WILL NEED A PLACE TO LIVE.

AND NOW YOURE TELLING ME I SHOULD DO MORE WELL HERES WHAT I WONT DO ANYMORE PLAN PINICS FOR TWO ON THE LIVING MORE BY THE FIRE PLACE. RUN YOUR BATH WATER WHEN YOUR HOME LATE FROM WORK OR TURN DOWN YOUR BED.

I WONT WRITE YOU ROMATIC POETRY AND HIDE IT IN YOUR PURSE AND TELL YOU MY FEARS AND SECRETS OF MY HEART OR REMEMBER EVERY ANNIVERSERY OR BIRTHDAY CARD FROM HUSBAND TO WIFE.

NO LONGER WILL CALL TO TELL YOU I LOVE YOU AND IM ON MY WAY HOME CANT WAIT TO HOLD YOU IN MY ARMS.

BITTER THAT’S NOT FOR MEN WERE EMOTIONLESS AND THINK FROM ONE PLACE WELL THIS OUTBURST SHOULD EXPLAIN ALL THAT IVE SAID THEN I GUESS I WAS BEST THAT I LEFT INSTEAD.

Copyright © SPOKENWORDARTIST ... [ 2005-07-09 01:23:56]
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Re: BITTER (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 01:48:10 AM AEST
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I heard that loud-n-clear.
Very creative thinking.
huggs,
emy

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