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Icebergs
Contributed by
Benny14
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Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 01:06:51 AM in AEST
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The great thing about the iceberg is
That you have no idea what’s below the waterline
Seven-eighths is left to the unknown, expert at hiding their personality
Some will shelter you when you need anchor or refuge from the storm
Some will break a path in front of you, when there seemed no way out
A monument to reliability, against the wind and current it will carry you
Others will wait,
Seemingly harmless
But will hardheartedly bury you
Breaking the very ship the bears you
And if ever you are daring enough
Bold-faced and raring enough
To approach nature’s masters of disguise
Make sure you know which of these you will meet
On your passage through this watery deep
Time and time again, I have met the latter
But I will continue searching for the one that brings me home
Copyright ©
Benny14
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2005-07-09 01:06:51]
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Re: Icebergs
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 09:04:58 PM AEST
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| Excellent write. At first when I read this I felt like life was the iceberg. Then when I reread this again. I was thinking that's a man speaking and the iceberg is the woman. Hhhmmm. It was great and definitely thought provoking. Peace to you. Laura |
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Re: Icebergs
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 05:45:15 AM AEST
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Wwwwwwwwwwwoooowwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!Mezmerising and i heah wat u say.
still reading.
smiles,
emy |
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