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Sapphires - A Tercet
Contributed by
ramfire
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Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 12:40:00 PM in AEST
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This is heaven's stone so blue as the day sky.
Earth in space takes its rest on a sapphire.
And the sapphire casts out its blue rays right.
The rich British Crown Jewels where they lie
do now show bluish gems of the Empire.
All the sapphires there do give us fine sight.
Cool blue stone's Jupiter's mark that's so high.
Through strong scope seen as a spot of bright fire.
And in space circles the sun with great light.
Near stands priest chosen of God who prays nigh
in a breastplate of gems and some play lyre.
For all time stone will bless as it shines bright.
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2003-01-09 12:40:00]
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Re: Sapphires - A Tercet
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 01:15:43 PM AEST
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as beautiful as the others waiting for the next i have liked them all
sharon |
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Re: Sapphires - A Tercet
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by Ramfire on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 01:31:57 PM AEST
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Thanks Sharon. Should I write more of precious stones? Maybe you'd like a different rhyme scheme and meter. Let me know.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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Re: Sapphires - A Tercet
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 04:18:02 PM AEST
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Beautiful.... Your the brightest gem so far in this series of beautiful stones:)
*huggs* always Nessa |
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Re: Sapphires - A Tercet
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by Ramfire on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 05:07:19 PM AEST
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Thanks Nessa for your very kind words. Should I continue with more stones or stop at this point?
Regards,
Ramfire |
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Re: Sapphires - A Tercet
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 05:14:54 PM AEST
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HI RAMFIRE,
THIS IS VERY NICE,I CAN TELL YOU LOVE JEWELS.
I THINK I GOT YOUR DRIFT.GOOD WRITE.RICHARD CAMPBELL |
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Re: Sapphires - A Tercet
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by Ramfire on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 05:37:46 PM AEST
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Thank you for your kind words. You've made my day.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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Re: Sapphires - A Tercet
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by mckayla on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 08:04:30 PM AEST
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| the connections you make in this poem are beautiful! |
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