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2 people
Contributed by
Taylor
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Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 08:17:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I cut my self today.
I watched the pain and blood drip away.
Slowly a feeling of numbness takes over my body.
An XTC or an emotional pain.
"you can not kill me like this"
slice me some more
Smile and wave.
Split between two people.
Bittersweet.
A razorblade kiss.
Copyright ©
Taylor
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2005-07-08 20:17:20]
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Re: 2 people
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 08:59:12 PM AEST
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i liked this. short, but sweet. i liked how you got the emotion out and i wish that you didn't feel this way. and it makes me sad to think that their is another victim of cutting. i don't know if anything i say can change you ways. but i do hope that, even though we may not know each other, i don't want you to die or be hurt. that was a great write above ^^^ and i want to see more of your poetry. but it was a great write, keep it up!!
wishing you the best of luck!
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Re: 2 people
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by upomik on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 09:34:31 PM AEST
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| nice poem. mine are similar to it. you should read. i cut myself today too. it feels great while ur doing to but then you gotta worry about hiding the scars so stupid people won't be all up in your business and asking questions and stuff like that. |
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Re: 2 people
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by Drapes on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 09:35:53 PM AEST
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Really good...
"A razorblade kiss."
I just love that!
Great write!
-Drapes |
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