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Blinding Sunlight
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 06:51:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Can you see me?
I'm sat here in the sunrise
No more tears in my eyes
Smiling, dancing
Look at me!
Everything is going right
As the sun goes up in the sky
I'm talking, to you, and them
I'm so much more aware of the world
I've unfurled
The sun is at its highest point
And all the shadows are so small
So short
And yet I'm caught
Awake, alive, but still so scared
I'm alone, and it doesn't matter what you say
The sun is blinding, so hot
Burning down;
I'm caught between the sun and the shadows
Scars jump out at me, winking
Tempting
As everything is going so well
New chances, new choices
Lost voices and empty hearts
Afraid to fall apart, again
Someone hold me
It can't start all over again
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Re: Blinding Sunlight
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by Unbreakable on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 06:58:58 PM AEST
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well..if you haven't written in a long time, it's certainly not noticable, this is a very nice write and you are obviously very talented with words. Great write...don't ever stop writing, even when you have nothing to write about, that's usually when you come up with your best ideas. Keep it up!
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Re: Blinding Sunlight
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by Apolla on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 07:43:38 PM AEST
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| I like this write and the refrences you use with the sun. I've haven't written in a long time as well but this is an excellent write. You came back strong!! |
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Re: Blinding Sunlight
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 03:49:02 PM AEST
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Wow great poem Charlotte I am amazed at
how much I can relate to this at the moment.
A great poem and I just love how you started
it off and how it ended and I just loved it all. I
hope you start writing and posting more
since you are a great writer.
Bobo (Joel) |
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