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So Ironic
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 04:37:00 PM in AEST
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The clock strikes twelve and things fall apart
Someone spits on the sidewalk; another calls it art
A dog chases a skunk and gets a nasty surprise
What holds one man back, another defies
Remember your umbrella on the day it doesn't rain
She says I love you; he resolves to abstain
The moon shifts and all the crazies hit the street
Be a wallflower in a bar of the fashionably elite
Dancing to the beat of your own drum
never yielding until both legs go numb
Inhale the smoke with weak, raspy breath
enjoy its cancerous filth that leads to your death
Flee to the land of the one-winged bird
where hateful contempt is seasoned, then stirred
Listen to a song till it starts to annoy
Let resentment replace hope like an evil decoy
Catch the sun rise, and mutter you've seen better before
Paint your pity off white, give it a fresh decor
Shout at the top of your lungs when you really wanna cry
Tell the truth for a change, instead of another lie
Think of the funniest comeback a day after the joke
Once again I speak to you with the touch of a keystroke
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2005-07-08 16:37:00]
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Re: So Ironic
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by jyssvw22 on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 05:06:11 PM AEST
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wow scorp i really love this one, you are making a hell of a good point here
fabulous write
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Re: So Ironic
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 05:34:17 PM AEST
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The talented Scorp does it again. Strutting her brillance on us again. A remarkable piece of poetry u have here Scorp. Keep 'em coming. Well done
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Re: So Ironic
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 05:50:33 PM AEST
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| Very impressive write. I found being a bit demented can be a good thing. Peace to you my friend. Laura |
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Re: So Ironic
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 05:54:58 PM AEST
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How do you do it
this poem I love
the rhyming is
great as is the poem
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Re: So Ironic
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 08:21:53 PM AEST
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The truth and the whole truth, else it is a lie. What a diseased mind this person(s) has. I this all this must be communicable for it seems to be rampant in life. Sadly, rampant in life.
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Re: So Ironic
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by CarolinaBlue on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 08:49:37 PM AEST
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So very ironic indeed! I really liked this Scorp, the flow was great, but it was all the truth within your "demented" thoughts that really kept me going. What a wonderful mind you have ;-)
Blue |
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Re: So Ironic
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 09:37:57 PM AEST
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wow, scorp. this was awesome. i loved the feeling and all the different things occuring at once. and everything is so true! amazing! great write, keep it up!!
~sprints |
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Re: So Ironic
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 10:23:12 PM AEST
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Brought to you by..((("Pain and Truth")))
Wow- Scorp, this is the best by you, that I've read yet!
7.. 9..and 10!~
(lest I recite the thing.. lol)
what an amazing write!!
and what a powerful simplicity.. this has-
I bloody loved it!!
Billy
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Re: So Ironic
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by wizard on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 02:45:02 AM AEST
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some clear ironies here...i really liked reading this, i had a chuckle at the end of each line, not so much that they were humorous, but at how well you conveyed your idea.
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Re: So Ironic
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 05:31:19 AM AEST
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| Holy ____!!!!! To me this was very intense and thought provoking in more ways than I know how to say. Awesome and has to be one of your best. |
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Re: So Ironic
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 12:15:27 PM AEST
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Irony at its best!!!
Jenni |
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Re: So Ironic
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by mindset on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 04:50:54 PM AEST
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| ever asked the question what fueles this timeless word :) |
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Re: So Ironic
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 05:15:27 PM AEST
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scorp even demented your a true genius, lol
beautifuly written, by truly a wonderful person
. . . (((((scorp))))
Ben
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Re: So Ironic
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by SocialMisfit on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 01:46:39 AM AEST
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scorp your poems are always so perfect for my moods lol i love reading your writes thank you for posting them :D
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Re: So Ironic
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by Dorkfish on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:05:18 PM AEST
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| Great job Scorp! Not demented as much, but realistic in a sense. It's a a very creative and expressive, very good!! |
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Re: So Ironic
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by Dorkfish on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:06:02 PM AEST
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| Great job Scorp! Not demented as much, but realistic in a sense. It's very creative and expressive, very good!! |
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Re: So Ironic
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 31st October 2014 @ 12:05:15 AM AEST
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The moon shifts and all the crazies hit the street
I love this line. i remember BEING one of those crazies.
Catch the sun rise, and mutter you've seen better before
Paint your pity off white, give it a fresh decor
damn damn damn. what a great picture. love reading you
Shout at the top of your lungs when you really wanna cry
Tell the truth for a change, instead of another lie
I know what you mean. but telling the truth means being truthful and that usually means hurting others or being hurt.
You are great, I am falling in love with your poetry. Is that weird? |
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