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Humble Rose
Contributed by
Vox
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Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 03:09:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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And here i am -a humble rose-
of light i did not speak.
I bloomed inside the shadows
but never once was weak.
I spread my pedals in the wind
by other hand - not mine-.
I fed with nectar the hungry bee's
without them knowing it was I.
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Vox
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2005-07-08 15:09:52]
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Re: Humble Rose
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by Unbreakable on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 03:37:51 PM AEST
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I like this...it's short, sweet and to the point..and it has a good rhythm..good write, keep it up!
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Re: Humble Rose
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 05:22:30 PM AEST
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Excellent wording; short and simple, but beautiful. No word is out of place in this piece, I think. Well done!
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