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Grim Chain Letter
Contributed by
lilschizoboy07
on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 01:50:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Brotha Flyin down I-75
swervin thru traffic, barely staying alive
in a 60 mi. zone doin 95
sees a cop in a mirror
now sweatin fervently
pulls over and says,
"I'm sorry sir, but I have an emergency
My little brother's in the back, that's why I'm speedin and swervin, see.'
Cop says ,"No excuses boy, you shouldnta sped."
Brotha's mad now, "But this kid's bleedin from the head!"
Cop looks in the back and says,
"Boy, he's long been dead."
And wrote the brotha a ticket.
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2005-07-08 13:50:11]
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Re: Grim Chain Letter
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 03:21:18 PM AEST
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hmm very interesting.
I dont know what to make of it lol. |
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Re: Grim Chain Letter
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by flamingblade on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 12:05:30 PM AEST
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this poem to me says anger at authority
its a really good write |
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Re: Grim Chain Letter
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by Drapes on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 09:34:32 PM AEST
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Wow... thats so sad. I'm not too sure what to make of it either but its really good. Really got my attention.
-Drapes |
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Re: Grim Chain Letter
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by SCREAM on
Monday, 24th March 2008 @ 05:28:03 PM AEST
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I think I understand..
but if you're going to write poetry, then you might want to try and write POETRY!!
(not this..) and so, yes... it was grim.
..jus' my two cents- (others concur)
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