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Painful Comfort 1
Contributed by
LabWolf
on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 10:43:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Leave me in my painful comfort,
I'll stay and play with my muse;
I'll enjoy my peaceful anguish,
When you'd think I'd win I lose.
Watch me as I tear my heart out,
And my teardrops fall like rain;
If only I could let you feel it,
But I'm sure you'd go insane.
Give me back my darkest hour,
When the feeling was so pure;
Give me back my childhood wonder,
Before I knew life was a whore.
Leave me in my painful comfort,
As life slithers down the drain;
Only when there's nothing left -
Is there anything to gain.
© Barry Veinotte
http://maniacal-writings.veinotte.com
Copyright ©
LabWolf
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2005-07-08 10:43:45]
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Re: Painful Comfort 1
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 10:55:57 AM AEST
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Hrm, dark, just the way i like poetry, Awesome job really, its very good, the ending leaves with a real light touch that sends chills up your spin, Greatness
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Re: Painful Comfort 1
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by Kitty06 on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 04:20:30 PM AEST
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| The second stanza is by far the best part of the poem. It fully captures the pain of the poem. An overall great poem. |
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