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A World At War
Contributed by
-damien-
on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 08:52:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
war
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As I silently sit I think whose war is this
As a violent bomb hits I see within the mist…
A broken down child praying for death
1 leg on his chest as the medics do the rest
Dead bodies around him take to the sky
While innocent people are scarred for life
Immense negative vibes and frantic attitudes
700 disturbed, millions confused
Terrorists amused, planning the next act
The public abused for our leaders attacks
While they rest safely wallowing in safety
Completely untouched with pay slips daily
The truth we lack is backfiring upon us
We blindly believe, in government we trust
If there is absence of hope then freedom is lost
So I hope we forget these paths we’ve crossed
A world gone mad, a world at war
How long will this continue for
Copyright ©
-damien-
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2005-07-08 08:52:37]
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Re: A World At War
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 09:00:52 AM AEST
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great job
very well done
this writing is great
your poem speaks out loud
prefection in every word
is that enough ways to say I like it |
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Re: A World At War
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by brew on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 10:17:58 AM AEST
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power and dignity.we all have our own look at what has happened.we do all know it was and is a sad tragacies for all that were hurt, and what they have lost. Write what is in the heart.
Brew~ |
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Re: A World At War
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by jjones12 on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 10:42:06 AM AEST
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i think your a great writter! keep it up!!this is my oppinion, i think that we as american's should support our troops. we really don't know how bad it is over there. but i also think it's very wrong to kill so very many inesent people. i think you have a great point of veiw. keep it up!!!
=Jen=
i'm anxious to talk more about this subject. |
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Re: A World At War
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 03:24:32 PM AEST
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I like this write really.
and i dont find this advensive at all..
anyways good write. |
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