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When you are a loser?

Contributed by naveen on Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 08:26:18 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Looking for an idea
But ideas seldom arrive
Am am looking for a journey
But there's no "Guide"
A journey through thorny strides
Love and hatred coin's sides
Sometimes it rains to a new life
Ironically, flooding to extirpate too

Sometime's talking to myself
I wonder, what's happening
When will it all end
why we're here
where we destined to
That's a jargon tough to solve for whole life

Will it end someday
Will it be a moist summer's or chilly winter's
Will it be a demise
A renouncement of a scion
A chavaliar or a lion

OR

Will it be an sabotage, an encounter
An downfall of a lier or a poseur
A weak a "woebegone"

Life's in anguishes
I asked for a soft assuage
But it was bruishes in return
A single step I cruised forth
Envies in world's eyes.

My poem's no more entice
They are not piercing or incessant
With emotions and nothing to set
Fila to sent Reader into a trance

They're just dumb word's
Nothing germane to reader's delights
They stagnate, like my life
It's frozen iceberg
A heart stone a rocked

Used to be in fames
But now it's lost game
Now am been laughed, am a loser
Trying to write my heart's agonies

And you audiences(reader's) also following
a same pursuit, a same stride
Leaving me quaint and curious
why would you bother
to read a loser a useless person
Abandoning me to
Same Lonely

A SEQUEL LIFELONG........

naveen
My poem's my diary
http://www.poem-xpress.blogspot.com

Copyright © naveen ... [ 2005-07-08 08:26:18]
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Re: When you are a loser? (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 08:53:07 AM AEST
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nice write.

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