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Pain

Contributed by olddarkme on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

From sharpely focused between pearing eyes
that witness a spreading of overcast skies.
Those skies open up in a deluge of rain that
meets at a point in a river of pain.

Pain that radiates beyond normal scope that
throbs in all angles and crushes all hopes.
Staring at nothing where vision is sought
with a head that is bowed in the corner to
rot.

But where have I gone while my senses were
blind? Amidst all the passing of scenes in
my mind? Stuck in a place where wellness
once grew. Lost in emotions that break me
in two.

Copyright © olddarkme ... [ 2003-01-09 10:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by SmokinJoeEvil on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 12:03:11 PM AEST
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This poem reads fantastically. I especially liked the line "Stuck in a place where wellness once grew.", as if, once it was lost, the good you remembered of that place was still too much to leave, yet staying only causes more pain and loss. Nice job.

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 03:50:37 PM AEST
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ooh...this is so sad...the last verse to this is amazing...oh, i don't know what to say...

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 05:33:09 PM AEST
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A very well written and compelling piece...I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

Thank you for your comments on mine.
Chrissie :)

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