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a sonet to my love
Contributed by
lostrelic
on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 02:30:37 AM in AEST
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you lied and spite in my face
after all that i told
for what a toy on a string
you used me and laughed and threw me away
what a joy you have brung
lalalala lalalala la la la la
into the fire with me
lalalala into the grave yard with me
throw me the shovel and watch me
as i hurry to bury my tomb
lalalala lalalala la la la la
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2005-07-08 02:30:37]
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Re: a sonet to my love
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 12:57:35 AM AEST
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You have disgraced the dicipline or art...
and I only find it necessary to say that:
1. "Sonnet" was mispelled..
2.
It wasn't a sonnet...true to form..
(4lines...
(4lines...
(4lines...
and..
(2 lines...
You truly are a LOST... relic!
Maybe it's me but..form and verse are most important when you so blazonly display them as such..
Good Luck!
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Re: a sonet to my love
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 06:01:40 AM AEST
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Hasn't anyone on this side heard of poetic lisence?
I mispell my words on purpose as i stieve to preserve my country slang.
My son informed me long ago that as a poet I can make up my own words.
I can speak and write properally but I neva was one to be the so called normal. even still I will go out of my way to be different.
i've never had a lesson except the school thing in writing lyrics or poetry.
I write what I feel or what I channel.
Keep up the good writing, friend mispelled words-n-all.
huggs, smiles,
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