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me AND the future
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 01:43:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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why are we all playing this silly game
all we do in other peoples name
this false sense of happy this sang rala
we read and watch what we think we assume so much
we are not gilty not one of us
if you look real close your living a sin
but belive your car wax and your tv to they both mean the same
alot of hard work to make you shine
what a weird rant what a weird daze
maze is my life i live in a glaze
this is my story as unreal as i can get
cause when i tell the truth well you know what you get
images of junkies and thives in the night not what you see from your tv light
this is just fiction as strange as it get come on havent you looked out your windows yet
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lostrelic
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2005-07-08 01:43:19]
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Re: me AND the future
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by emystar on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 05:02:44 AM AEST
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Very good writing with strong meaning.
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Re: me AND the future
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by -why_not_let_me_live- on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 07:09:38 AM AEST
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yes very good wrote with a strong meaning ehond it keep writing like this n mayb u wont b in the least read nemore i cant understand y this poem is
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