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Death For A Kiss
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 12:39:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I died in her arms
She brought me back
With one kiss
It turned my cheeks a
Rosie shade of red
As if she became
A part of me
That is with me always
That other can see
When I smile and blush
She makes me happiest
Everyone can tell
They all know she is
The only reason
I feel the way I do
And the only reason
That I am the way I am
Is because of her love for me
I do so love to love her
It is so sweet and kind
And pure, truthful
So very honest and hopeless
I had everything I wanted
But still wanted to die so
I did die in her arms
I was able to see
Her soul
When mine was set free
I did die in her arms
But came back because
How she loves
Is the only reason
One could ever need to come back
And to never want to leave
But I did want to die so that
And do so over and over and over again
For the same reason as the first time
I had to get her to kiss me
Maybe all I had to do was ask?
But it was and still is worth it
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Re: Death For A Kiss
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by emystar on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 12:53:55 AM AEST
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A masterpeice as u arn't afraid to show your need for luv.
Very good traite to have.
huggs, smiles,
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Re: Death For A Kiss
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 06:54:10 PM AEST
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well writin
and expressed
I like this poem alot
5 for you |
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Re: Death For A Kiss
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 01:08:26 AM AEST
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good write-
shorten it up a bit..
you've got a story that is 20 stanzas long.. lol
could be 5..
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Re: Death For A Kiss
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by Gothchyk on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 03:30:48 PM AEST
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| I think the length is just right for the feelings expressed by the words contained in it mean so much. Beautiful write, muaw. |
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